Death...Sex...Ex Lover

Just wrote for a competition....

    Death .. O Death..
            When will you take me away from all these irrational things..
    Death .. O Death..
            When will you bless me with all the peace after so called Life..
    Death .. O Death..
            When will I will be lucky enough to leave this body and go to solace..


    Sex.. O Sex..
            When will you stop defining me, in Male Female..
    Sex.. O Sex..
            When will you understand that both should be considered equal...
    Sex.. O Sex..
            When will you won't pay attention to the urges you have...


    Ex Lover.. O Lover..
            When will you love me like you Did...
    Ex Lover.. O Lover..
            When will I completely forget you...
    Ex Lover.. O Lover..
            Till when I should wait for removing that 'X' from you...

Author's Note

Just wrote for a competition... Will modify more laters ^-^

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

I really loved the style....and form of this write smile....I mean really loved it...
I always like a unique approach to these topics and not only that but you covered them all in one write.
You summed up life in three succinct and colorful terms...
I think Death O death might be more powerful as the third stanza but it certainly works as is.
Great job
allen
color choice of fonts work perfectly..as does the third stanza...Do we ever forget?

[smilempsn]

Thank a lot Allen.. :)
I didn't knew, just sentences flowed out for those words...
Well color choice was made for defining what we think of those words in our life.....
Didn't knew about 'Ex-lover O lover' so choose a shade of red in pink....

well I didn't get you when you said...
'color choice of fonts work perfectly..as does the third stanza...Do we ever forget?'

Can u please explain :)
Thanks a lot again , for the wonderful review..

[Dark Artist]

Hmmm...I like the conversation aspect, it's a very nice touch I think. These are things I ask everyday ^-^ so it has actually depth and meaning for me which I find rare in a poem that is not of my own.

[smilempsn]

ThankU for the review and connecting to it Dark Artist..
Well even thought I wrote it for competition, but I wrote what came out of my head for all those words....

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem. I like the conversation aspect in it too along with other things...Well penned...:)

[smilempsn]

..hehe..ThankU Sami, I just wrote that in my free time in office :P and the WC's contest came up in my mailBox ;)
So just raw thoughts penned down here..!!

[Sami Khalil]

K. You are welcome...:)

[smilempsn]

^-^

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[smilempsn]

Photu Changed again :P

[Sami Khalil]

Yep...Hahaha...:)

[smilempsn]

:P :D

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[smilempsn]

aaiyoo.. changed again :-o

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...lol

[smilempsn]

some competition for ur pic too kya :P

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...lol

[smilempsn]

:P change except of these two also Sami ;)

[Sami Khalil]

;)