I wish I had...

my first attempt to write something in Story...^-^

Sara thought,
'I wish I had a pair of binoculars (magical one),
So that I would have seen it coming towards me.'

While sitting alone on a beach, feeling the air in her hair when sun was about to set in the deep blue water.. Creating world's most beautiful scenery, of Big Orange ball's shadow in blue water....

Ahh..!! Another thought crossed her mind, what has happened between her and her boyfriend. And Suddenly her thoughts were interrupted by a voice calling her name 'Sara...Sara.. Is that you girl?'

Sara looked past her shoulder, & the voice was none other than one of her school friends. It's been 7 years, she haven't seen any of her school friends. Ever since she left her hostel...her friends...her fun times..

She used to think about what ...how she will react if she meet anyone of them now. But NOW, when the time came she was lost in her thoughts of the fun times AGAIN..

The voice increased pace by pace, and Suddenly someone shook her by shoulder.. 'Sara...are you listening darling..? It's time for us to leave dear. The sun has already set and all the magnificent colors have merged in to black night, it would be late by the time we reach home and prepare dinner.'
Sara came back to senses from the flash back, took the hand-off her shoulder and walked with the person. The person whom she loved so much in life... The person who has been her 'a good luck charm' all through the years and a person who will always be there when Sara needs her... None other than her Mother... :)

As the night grew on, as always Sara kept on thinking about the time when she used to have lots & lots of friends. And how now, she doesn't have anyone other than her mother to share her life with ....

She tried to go to her bed, thinking what difference does these 7 years have made to her and her mother's life......

Why she was not in contact with any of her friends...??

Why her boyfriend became an ex boyfriend...??
Why she couldn't see the truck coming to them so fast, that night when she and her boyfriend were crossing street...??
Why Why Why...

All these Why's, lead her to the same wish
'I wish I had a pair of binoculars (magical one),
So that I would have seen it coming towards me.'

Author's Note

My very first attempt for writing a short story. Wrote it for a contest.
Let me know, where I can improve this ^-^
(an ex boyfriend, a pair of binoculars, and a good luck charm)

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Left me no were as the time passes by you have to tune up your mind and make him understand all when and nothing left, still life is bigger if you see it from a key hole it will be loomed and nothing can change it not even we so called stupid people who think we can make changes. I took me to my past where similar mishap left me dead. I wish we had something which we call as rewinding time or time machine. I would like to go back and make it happen which I wasn't aware of.
Wondering my life without some important people is again a full stop and you keep thinking if they were here with me. I would have made it act differently.

But destiny play's its role perfectly and steals all we have and asks us to start it over all again.
Which is not possible for us to do.

Loved the way you wrote this whole meaningful subject.

Cheer!
Singh :)

[smilempsn]

ThankU for the review VikrantSingh Parmar....

That was just written for a contest... The number of entries were less...so my Luck, got me 1st position there...

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow but still it was way touchy :) i felt good and better :)

[Death Girl]

I like this and when you have the, I wish i had a pair of binoculars (magical one) so that I would have seen it coming towards me, in the begining and end.

[smilempsn]

ThankU ^-^
this was just my first ever try to write something :)

[Death Girl]

you did a good job for your first time :)

[smilempsn]

ThankU again ^-^

[Gaurav Walia]

Wow th starting moved me... Great work :D

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU ^-^
my first ever attempt :P

[Gaurav Walia]

Congratz u did quite good..

[smilempsn]

ThankU :)