Its all about Myself.....

If I lose you,
        I'll lose myself..

If I love you,
        I'll love myself..

Being with you is all I can think about,
        If u forget me, I will never be myself...

Author's Note

Wrote it just like that :).. I mean I too am confused why those lines pop-ed up in my mind ^-^

Reviews

[Will Riley]

When i was reading this I had someone in mind. I'm pretty sure that's the effect you were looking for. there's so few words yet it's so powerful... this is just amazing

[smilempsn]

ThankU for the review Will ^-^

[Vikrantsingh]

Shabash!
Bravo!

Loved it :)

[smilempsn]

..hehe..ThankU ^-^

[Vikrantsingh]

;)

[smilempsn]

:D

[Wolfi :3]

I like it ^-^

[smilempsn]

^-^

[Wolfi :3]

:3

[Sami Khalil]

An awesome write with so much truth when it comes to lovers...Pen on ...:)

[smilempsn]

^-^ just loved ur review ^-^

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure ...:)

[smilempsn]

^-^

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[smilempsn]

:D :D

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[smilempsn]

Looks like some smiley contest going on ;)

[Sami Khalil]

I like that...:)

[smilempsn]

:P what ? Smiley's or contest ;) :D

[Sami Khalil]

;)

[smilempsn]

haha :P

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a very good poem. Your words are true in the poem. To know love. Must understand love and be kind. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[smilempsn]

ThankU for the kind words Coyote ... I really appreciate them ^-^

[Akshat♥]

I personally feel that if u love yourself than people will start loving you :)
if you start loving someone else more than yourself....
then either u get happiness or life long sadness...
short and sweet write up!! :)

[smilempsn]

:) no comments to that review :)

[Akshat♥]

lol..y so? is it bad?

[smilempsn]

:) no because what you wrote is so TRUE... :)

[Akshat♥]

o o...thnx!

[smilempsn]

^-^

[Akshat♥]

(^_*)

[smilempsn]

:)