Losing.....

Living is all about losing..

Losing your teeth to grow up..

Losing your virginity to become adult..

Losing your memory when you are old..

Losing your family when you are dead..!!

Author's Note

just random thoughts that poped up in my mind... :)

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I never thought of life in this way before...it is a sad thought, yet very intriguing...

"Chin up buttercup"... life is about winning!... :)

Winning your first love...
winning an argument...
winning respect from your colleagues...
never giving up, and being remembered as a "winner" in your family's eyes...

Thank you for sharing a thought provoking write. :)

[smilempsn]

Yesh Indeed it is.... A mix of Winning n Losing....
Sometimes its better to loose then to win, just to see the grey shades of life :)

[absent]

This is definitely a unique perspective on life. Even though we are losing all the time, I think we are gaining experience and knowledge, and that's not such a bad thing. Though you are right in pointing out how much we lose, and you did it in an abrupt but effective way. Good write!

[smilempsn]

ThankU kbmeadows ^-^

[Wolfi :3]

I really like this, it's very true.

[smilempsn]

^-^

[Emma Keynes]

I completely connect with this. It's a really sad concept but it's very true. I keep losing my friends when they move away and my neighbor just died, so this poem really touched me.

Thank you for writing the truth about so much in life! A simple, yet wonderful and touching poem!

Emma :)

[smilempsn]

Aww :comfort: :)

[Akshat♥]

facts are right...
but i completely disagree with this line that
living is all about losing...
life is about winning if u think in positive manner...
u can love people,nature,animals around you..
life is beautiful :)
if u want to live than live happily :)
make mistakes and learn from them..
keep writing!!

[smilempsn]

As I earlier wrote to Robbie.. I too believe in Winning & Losing...
After all it add the grey area to our life...

But the facts are facts :)
We live....yet we lose so many things :)
We lose.... but still we live :)

[Muse]

I never looked at it that way...

reality sad check.

Nice one!

[smilempsn]

Sad but True too :)

[jdr / Jennifer]

Very creative, very interesting... Unique, honest- short and to the point. Nicely done!

[smilempsn]

ThankU Jenn :)

[Gaurav Walia]

They are random but all are facts... Nicely Quoted...
Kudos!

[smilempsn]

:) ThankU

[Gaurav Walia]

you're quite welcome...