WHY..??

this was written at a moment where words just flowed out of me

Why my Temper is so much lost..
Why my patience is so much lost...

Why jokes don't look like joke..
Why I am turned so much serious folk..

Why I cry so much..
Why I am over emotional..

Why I hurt people so much now..
Why I can't express what I really want to say...

Why I love to keep things inside me and not tell anyone..
Why do I want people to hate me...

Why I want to be Alone every time at each point of my life..
Why I think I can't give love to anyone..

Why I want to forget everything ever happened..
Why I show people my heart is Stone...

instead it is like a Burning Candle....everyday..every hour .. losing its life...!!

Author's Note

anything & everything is welcomed :)

Reviews

[jdr / Jennifer]

“Why?” We can all relate to the questions inside of us. But ‘you’ brought to it a voice. We ask ourselves ‘why’ almost every day and the question is almost always different. But within this piece, I feel a great deal of doubt. Doubt of an ability to love, doubt of the ability to show people the warmth of your heart, doubt of the ability to show who you really are… And it does make for an intense unique piece of writing- but don’t doubt yourself. There is no limit to what you can accomplish in life- and there is no limit to how true the heart can feel as well as its amazing ability to heal. On another note: wonderful write. I liked that you asked the questions of Why. It made for a creative and interesting piece. Great flow to it and I really like your style. You have a great talent for writing. Never stop, keep developing and growing. And thank you for sharing this piercing and powerful piece of poetry.

[smilempsn]

I really feel overwhelmed now Jenn :) :)
ThankU a lot for writing.. Writing for me is just a way of expressing myself... when I cant show in my actions :) :)

Thanks a lot again.. You are really inspiring me to put down my poems here :)

[Akshat♥]

You have asked these questions which are completely related to me...
i also ask these questions to myself..that.."why?"
I never got any answer though...so I finally decided to move on
in life with a positive frame of mind:)
Lovely poem..keep writing!!

[smilempsn]

well well well... I have read your 'positive frame of mind' poems :P

ThankU for the review though ^-^

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for reading my work so far..i wish u will continue to do that ;)

[smilempsn]

hmm :)

[Akshat♥]

hmm means yes i suppose... ?

[smilempsn]

of course ... YESH..!! ^-^

[Akshat♥]

o gr8... specs suits u by the way :P

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU B-)

[Akshat♥]

god and ur mom created u amazing..so thank them not me lol :D

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. But in real life I don't have specs ;) :P

[Akshat♥]

I like every kind of beauty..bcz i admire everything ;)

[smilempsn]

:P :P bus bus..

[Akshat♥]

ok ok :P

[Wolfi :3]

I love, love, love it.

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU ^-^

[Wolfi :3]

You're welcome.

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

A mixture of emotions and yet the simple act of such a question makes it even more difficult to differentiate between the angst a slight optimism. Beautiful write in its own unique way.

[smilempsn]

ThankU :)

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Of course dear :)

[Charliee]

This is a really good writing!

[smilempsn]

ThankU charliee :)