Falling Deep

Months passed me by

But these feelings that I have

Still linger in my heart and soul

How can I resist?

Feels like I've thrown myself to a pit

Falling deep, sinking into the bottom

Having my heart buried alive

Can't escape this fate

In your love I'm falling deep !

-Kathleen l. Bulas

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[Bliss-Sensory]

(typo in third line) Also.....hmm. I wish you would of made some kind of reference to sinking so deep that the pressure swallows or etc. I don't know. I think you're so head over heels for your love that its frightening. That's how this piece makes me feel.