In a School of Crimson and Gold

I used simple diction in this sonnet and a bit of informality [e.g Barbies]

In a school of crimson and gold

Where Barbies rule and dominate

I met this guy of beauty and might

Treasures are in his innocent eyes

Like a storm flooding my only sight

Everywhere I go, Enchanted in his ways

He stands out in a crowd like mighty Zeus

And in a school of crimson and gold

Where education is the heart

I had met this pretty amazing guy

Walked on his paths on sunny days

Searched his footprints everywhere

On his smiles I found the road

And started out a journey to his heart

 

-Kathleen L. Burlas-

Reviews

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This is wonderful,
I loved the last two lines,
This is very well written.