Goodbye

On a moonless night

under the starless sky

I bid you adieu

I bid you adieu

There's so much I wanna say

It'll take a whole day

Isn't there another way??

I'll miss your smile

I'll miss your voice

I'll miss your touch

I'll miss your love

Oh, I'll miss the whole of you!

Oh, I'll miss the whole of you!

But never stop smiling.

coz m going

n that's what u wanted

coz that's what you wanted

But all I say 

before I go away 

from his life is

"Good bye"

On a moonless night

under the starless sky

I bid you adieu

I bid you adieu

I bid you adieu..

Author's Note

I've neva been in love so its okay if I get negative reviews. But pls leave a review.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Oh, I'll miss the whole of you!

Oh, I'll miss the whole of you!"

Splendid

[Desiree]

I think it has lovely tones. I like the line "I bid you adieu" and "starless sky". Wow never having been in love?! Consider yourself somewhat lucky, it is a tethered and unmovable web of insanity that can have immeasurable beauty when navigated well. All the best to you.

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

One goodbye, one tear and the less time you smile, but don't worry, it'll be alright. I've been on your side.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This almost sounds like it is supposed to be a song.Very nice and well written:)

[Khushi]

I wrote it as a song only. Thanks a lot!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Praveeta]

Creative way of showing separation in a lyrical manner.

[Rose of many colours]

Lovely, some times out of life borne experiences and this is the channel to create a wave with it . God bless great writer

[Khushi]

great writer.. m flattered.. Its the best compliment i have ever received. Thanks.

[Rose of many colours]

I am honored to meet and read your art.