GOD’S GIFT

GOD’S GIFT

A Poem by Athina
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see the beauty of the world and goodness of God

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The sunshine hits the blooming flower

As it shows God’s mercy and power

God’s blessings that on us it shower

Good God, higher than any tower.

 

It’s a nice world, a wonderful world

As everyone said by young and old

God’s gift for us, He’s the one who mold

A beautiful place as what we called

 

A crock crowing in the morning light

A bird that’s flying at any height

Such lovely scenes that fulfills my sight

Just to see God’s work, I feel alright

 

I’m so glad for God created me

To see the world’s outstanding beauty

To feel, to love and to be happy

Because of His love, I became me.

© 2012 Athina


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I love this! The last stanza is my favorite because it's so true! :) 100/100


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Athina

12 Years Ago

yes really true. thanx 4 ur review

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Added on October 21, 2012
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Athina
Athina

iloilo, 6, Philippines



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