Sakura

my first haiku

sweet petals drift

like an angel blown kiss

pink snowy bliss

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

not exactly 5 7 5

Reviews

[The Winter Grey]

This is very pretty. It has a lilting Eastern sensibility, and I can forgive it not being a straight 5, 7, 5... in fact, I think it adds something more to the poem.

[patricia]

a nice soft and warm read to start the day. thanks. loved it.