Against the Tide

A Poem by Bats In The Belfry

I watch your drift in a sea that claims you

powerless to fight the tide that take you

© 2013 Bats In The Belfry

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Robbie~xoxo~

The tide is strong...but with a guided hand, a soul can come out of it okay...This is a powerful write...such a poignant piece, with few words used.... Brilliant!

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Robbie, so sweet,i am humbly flattered

Revery

I see visions of outstretched arms and hands and finger tips in this write, but in sad reach that doesn't close the gap. A soul morning before it is time to mourn. Such a small amount of words with such a large meaning, nice write dear.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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11 Years Ago

Bahaaa...It was needed. I needed someone to see what I felt. Jokes always welcome!

11 Years Ago

Kindred spirits are good for that. :)

11 Years Ago

Indeed : )

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Added on January 8, 2013
Last Updated on January 8, 2013

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Bats In The Belfry

Foot Hills of the Blue Ridge Mountains, VA

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under constant construction... I'm creative and enjoy just about any outlet for it... I never thought of myself as a writer. I just did it and it was fun. The ability to create a dream to be read o.. more..