that guy

i tried :3

here i am again

after i heard you i ran

i didn't know what to think

you didn't even give me time to blink

or catch my breath

again, you make me think of death

ill just keep running

while you'll just keep gunning

those bullets straight into my heart

i should have known this from the start

i stop and sit on a bench

while smelling the stench

of all of your lies

i'm tired of all of these failed tries

i decide to take a look at the sky

i think of you and i just want to die

but then i look down and i see that guy

the one who makes my heart fly high

the one i can depend on

the one who has withdrawn

all of my faults

i have all of my love locked in a vault

but u cracked the code

u make my heart want to explode

your mine forever

my whole life has been an endeavor

but u know how to make me happy

no matter how my life is, good or crappy

i will always have you

and you will have me too

Author's Note

i tried my best :3

Reviews

[Serena]

:) good try for a deep poem. I like how the rhyme is consistint (or is it spelled consistent .-.). Hopefully your able to get the hang of putting really deep emotions and experiences into the art of poetry. ^ ^ I'll be waiting for the time that happens.
Keep up the good work :)

[smexykitten3987]

thx i went for a bit more of an emotional piece this time :)