Mr. Write

Mr. Write

 

From the moment we were introduced,

I felt a longing for your touch.

Something about you is so intriguing,

Your presence’s just too much.

 

Your eyes, so dark and mysterious,

I feel them gazing through my soul.

Your demeanor’s so inviting,

My inhibitions take the toll.

 

Do you know what you’re doing,

As you elicit my desire casually?

Am I the only person who feels this way?

Or has infatuation engulfed just me?

 

Perhaps in another time, another place,

When we would have met

I could live another life, another moment

One I would not regret.

 

Until that time, I shall avoid caress

As I gaze upon your works.

Dear writer, you captivate me.

In my fantasies, though, I’ll have all the perks.

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Do you know what you're doing,
As you elicit my desire casually?
Am I the only person who feels this way?
Or has infatuation engulfed just me?

Good ebb and flow, almost hypnotic...very passionate write.
Going in my Favorites! Thanks for sharing!

[Arthur Henn]

I really liked the way you wrote this, very nice flow. As a writer of poetry in the fashion of what comes from the heart at a given moment. I can relate to this piece. Its going in my library.

Thank you for sharing.

Art

[Baby Boy]

Wow! I like this gurl! This is beautiful and I can feel your heart through your words! :) Great write Miss Oneztwolls! :) The rhyming is perfect and I love the title! You made me smile! :) One luv sweetie!


-JC-

[Tania Leigh]

Never underestimate the power of a gifted writer :-)

"Perhaps in another time, another place,
When we would have met
I could live another life, another moment
One I would not regret."

Great poem!

[The Tao of Bri]

What a beautiful tribute to your yearning fantasy.. i like the energy this contains.. you can feel the desire and the imagination running wild.

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

really wonderful write in time for Valentine's Day! Great job! :)

[THERISA]

Until, i reached the last stanza, thought i was reading an erotic poem to a lover. Then, realized that you were writing about a person fantasizing over a writer on the web. Great job, Angi. Thank you for sharing this poem, with us.

[Timothy Morris]

I really like the flow of this. I'm pretty sure it's the type of fan mail every struggling author dreams of getting.

[Rain]

This was a very interesting write. I feel the realness in it, and know that the intenet with it's ability to seduce you, has done just that. When I read a poem like this, I wonder if that person knows the power of his words, or do you know you may have the same magnetic effect on him, with your words. You write for countless others caught in the same web. I liked this , alot. Rain..

[An Ordinary Woman]

Until that time, I shall avoid caress

As I gaze upon your works.

Dear writer, you captivate me.

In my fantasies, though, I'll have all the perks. ... Very nice, strong ending that made me smile knowingly. I really like this a lot. I relate to it.

Very well written ....

[Celtic Cat]

Very sweet. Oh I love those encounters, when something inside you just turns on and stays on. And yes, very tricky since we can't read their minds and are forced to live in our fantasies. Which to me isn't entirely bad, since fantasy usually surpasses reality anyway. Excellent piece, great flow, good rhymes, universal sentiment!! Have fun at work!! ; )