Love is a Contact Sport

Love is a Contact Sport

A Poem by oneZtwoLLs
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Written for a contest

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To touch her body,

To feel her warmth.

Only then could my pleasure be released.

 

Her body so sculpted,

Her figure so moving

I watch helplessly awaiting our touch.

 

Yearning to feel her,

Aching to hold her

I reach out to the extreme.

 

She jumps on my lap

I pet her back.

Love is a contact sport.

© 2008 oneZtwoLLs


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This a great. I really like the surprise at the end, and the message is without doubt fact. I am going to make it a point to read more of your work, but only one per day as I do not want to make the inevitable comparisons between your various works.

Posted 16 Years Ago


When i looked at the title for your poem, i was thinking of other things than your cat. The simple act of making contact with another living animal, is a special bond and should cherish as so. Your poem more than honours that connection between you, two. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

Therisa

Posted 16 Years Ago


Short and sweet. Powerful, and well crafted.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I saw the title and had to review this...Nicely done, good description of love

Posted 16 Years Ago


Love is a contact sport. Whether it's a dog or a person, that line still applies! Very nice write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


How cute! I have a dog and two cats and I couldn't agree more!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really like this. I have a dog and I love her like this......

Posted 16 Years Ago



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