Invisible

Angry eyebrows furrowed in the statement "I lost time!"  I listened and quietly whispered  "breathe, just breathe."  He walked away, and I stayed behind, waiting for that moment that he sees through the wall of all that seems real, the place where time stands still, and sees me.

Reviews

[Zeek4]

Beautifully written. Short and sweet with a clear message.

[Larry Dyson]

great start ,plausible and drawing.

[Crow]

I superbly simple, yet eloquent statement.

[Art Sun]

anger is such a blinding force...it keeps one from seeing past their own faults...nice work

[Ken Simm.]

A single moment to bring back the time that was lost. Beautifully complete in and of itself.