Night's Length

or Knight perhaps...

For Knight...mine this night devine
my heart for thine does reminisce
fallen have I this eternal night mine
thy heart, thy words thy whispers miss

gentle breeze feel I no more for thee
bathe can I not nor hear falcon's wings
closeness proximate thy breath to me
yet no love on heated wind to me brings

torchure not this sourced soul this day
come to breathe a love sonnet thine
keep not passions spirit at bay
come to me retiled lover mine

and soar shall we through eternity...

Author's Note

a practice session for the ressurection of the Layde and the Knight series...perhaps?

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

yes perchance that was a lovely language suited the emotions here
night divine ,my heart for thine does call,fallen i have all through
your heart your words your whispers i wait and sigh
gentle breeze of no more use you are to me
cant even bathe nor hear birds wings
could feel you so close,your breath
yet no love ,no wind to me brings
its a torture to my soul
come to me lover of mine
that was so sweet and lovely..loved the language
this only needed a music,and we could sing it all along
lovely write..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are great at mixing Shakespearian with your own style... true to yourself with a touch of the classic style... a magnificent description of true love.