Love is like taffy...

bored silly....

Push me
pull me
stretch me long...

Pull me more
it's fine
I'm strong...

Add some color
don't add green...
it's all wrong

raspberry blue
my eyes are too
my lips are like pulled taffy tongs

If you made it to the end
you're bored too
so love I send...

 

Reviews

[just is]

very creative and i enjoyed the playfullness of your words.
This is wonderful. You do have talent I like your style.

[Wildecat]

Very creative poetry, a total pleasure to read your poetry.

[Gandré]

this was totally creative, I loved it!! -so sweet, with few words.. and such an action and meaning. amazing work.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Never thought of love that way but you have a great point... a fun little write.

[Ken Simm.]

For someone bored this is lovely. Taffy is what we call Candy Floss? From fairgrounds?