Birth

I started a contest ... safety in numbers...wouldn't be fair if I didn't at least do it too. Only seven words, including the title...

        Harder....

                       Again...

                                  Breathe...
               PUSH...

                                           POP!

                               Wail....

Reviews

[vanishing]

this is classic and original..clever in its artistic humorous intention
I really got a kick out of reading -thank you..
the form is capturing.

[she makes me weird]

This is fantastic! 7 words and I felt anxious, pain, anticipation, and happiness, all in your 7 words.

[Dezaraye]

I love it! This definitely puts us there in the moment. I love the verbs.

[Periac]

loved it

[Ken Simm.]

Interesting that only men have reviewed so far. Probably thinking that is all it is. Witty little ditty.

[[untitled]]

Clever and witty. Thank you for sharing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

LOL yes very funny... I bet woman wished it was that easy... seriously you showed childbirth in its simplicity.

[James K. Blaylock]

I'm found this to be so cute. Although, I'm sure it's a living hell!

jkb