Walking away

Ever notice that when friends fight...one is always more bothered than the other?

Titter….

                   Tatter…

 

                                      Pish Posh…

Words to say

                             Are kept in knots.

She walks…

 

                             SHE runs.

She cries…

                             SHE hums.

Bothered.

 

                             Not.

Pity Pot.

 

Reviews

[Rambling Prose]

What a delightful piece; "na-na na-na boo hoo" sprang to mind and I could almost hear the voices of children as they chanted it over and over again!

~one of those - made me smile writes~

[Ken Simm.]

I really do love this. Such a treat of a poem with such a singing.

[Pakino]

Nice flow. Sounds like a children song. Really nice job.

[Dezaraye]

I love this piece! It's really a great two-voice poem and I like the flow of it, too. Short, sweet, to the point, and very powerful!