Laydes Song

her response to her Templar's song...(Layde and the Knight part 3)

Words from thee the wind doth carry
oh night, mine Knight doth sing in treachery
bring to mine heart and day break tarry
in darkness eternal doth he wait for me

A whisper soft mine skin cold doth feel
love's sweet memory doth rise above
within thine whispers doth my heart reel
ne'er dawn to break  - I await thy love

Words ne'er heard by mine ears do I speak
this heart, mine heart, betrayed for thee
death ne'er us part ‘tis a ghost mine eyes seek
For eternity waits mine heart be free

Oh Knight mine I wait for thee...

 

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Ken%20Simm/173863/ This poem is in response to Ken's "The Ghost". The photo was taken by Ken as well.

Reviews

[THE BLACK SEAL]

i really dig the medieval stuff, and this is impecable with the words you used. it really paints a vivid picture, but now i am going to have to go read the other installments before i can really give you anything indepth about it as anything less might be unfair.
I will check them out tommorow, This seems to be quite the epic

[Rhine Wolf]

only in death can they forever be! really enjoying the whole series, and the photo is so beautiful! thank you to both of you for putting this together and taking us all on this journey.

[Tania Leigh]

This series is classic, and as always your command of the language is amazing.

Please keep me up to date on these, Susi, as well as any writing you wish to send.
You've been a great friend to me here, and I will miss that....let's stay in touch!

*hugs*

[Gandré]

This could be also a wonderful song.. ohm... something with mandolin... Good that you still write such beautifulness. oh yeah, I recognized Ken's photo with filters right away... Scotland, isn't it? Hope all is well.

[Ken Simm.]

This flows so well and I feel is better than a response. It has a life of its own. This tragic tale will continue.