An Angel's Hell

an angel whispers in my ear of fiery paths and darkness...

This lovely angel

she sings in my ear

as we dance hip to hip

to lip to cheek.

 

And I love her

ripped out broken wings.

And I kiss her

the scars left from her fall

 

into the fires

the fires of her soul

the fires of my eyes

the fires of our hearts

the fire 'tween her thighs.

 

And I love her

laying on her back.

And I kiss her

a blazing sacred path

 

through the darkness

the darkness of her fear

the darkness of my mind

the darkness of our room

the darkness between us.

 

And I love her

my angel.

And I kiss her

my fallen.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Oh, snap! This is very beautifully written, so poetic.
Great write!

into the fires
the fires of her soul
the fires of my eyes
the fires of our hearts
the fire 'tween her thighs.

So sensual and full of love...and passion.
I like this a lot!

And you simply must give something this well written a title...
How about "Burning"?

[poetic soul]

poetically and emotionally beautiful creation.... :) very very well written............. :) liked it....

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Last Lying Look]

wow. this was really lovely. May favorite part was:
"And I love her

ripped out broken wings.

And I kiss her

the scars left from her fall"

For some reason that part was especially pretty to me.
Great job.
Love it!