Paper Army

Fighting to make the pain of a loved one cease.

Your pain,

tears through my core,

as if I were in a paper army,

and it started raining.

Reviews

[Geo Lawrence]

lovely, it will go. change seems immortal

[Edward Lancheister]

struggle in simply words :)

thanks for share

[Charlie Ragsdale]

Deep very deep your words of knowledge is touch

[rach]

Thank you.

[Mayank]

very nice and very intense.

[rach]

Thank you.

[Baby Ricochet]

This is a really good piece. Thanks

[rach]

Thank you for reading.

[Gummy.G]

Sweetie, water evaporates. And so will your pain.

[rach]

I hope so!