Falling in Love With You

Poem about a girl falling in love with a guy after her heart is broken. hope you like.

My heart had been broken
Shattered beyond repair
At least that's what I though
 Until I saw you there

You were standing in the hall
and as if on cue
 you smiled nice so sweetly
when I looked over at you

you chatted with friends
and laughed with them all
with your eyes on me
That's when I first started to fall

my heart was once broken
yours was once too
but now I have fallen
in love with you

Over the year we talked
became so close
And you were the one
that I loved the most

If you ever loved me
I didn't know
because I promise you
It never did show

One day while we talked
which we did a lot
you said my love
was what you sought

I was taken aback
yet ever so pleased
I said yes I will be yours
 long ago my love you had seized

Author's Note

well? What do you think??????? REVIEW PLEASE!!!!

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

Reminds me of 1personal experience and 2 REO Speedwagon's song "can't fight this feeling" awesome poem!

[Aehr]

happened with many of us, huh?

[Abbie]

XD that's how I try to write, so that people can relate. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yep

[Aehr]

oh.. i can relate completely, but its VERY complicated.. i don't know what's happening at the moment, regarding this situation, and.. uhh.. that's.. pretty much it!!!

[Abbie]

Rhea! XDDDDDD

[Aehr]

lol... I know, I swear I don't know, seriously, you wouldn't too, if you were in my situation!! :P lol...

[Abbie]

I may not be in your situation, but I've probably been really close if it's like this poem, cuz this poem is the exaggerated story of me and a guy I had liked. it's not so exaggerated tho. and it happened pretty much like this...

[Aehr]

oh, I get it... and its better I don't say anything about my own situation, or I'm going to blurt everything out! *Lips Sealed* ... lol

[Abbie]

yeah... and I would too! XD

[Aehr]

lol... :P :P :P

[Abbie]

XP

[Aehr]

its awesome.. very sweet! I can relate to it, actually... but its a bit complicated... uhh!!! Anyway, its really sweet and I just have to shelve this!!!!

[hopelessromantic]

i love this its so sweet

[Sophie]

I love this! great rhyme scheme!

[luna11]

Beautiful :)
I love it.
Great poem,
xx

[Angelic Surrender]

I love this! it's beautiful :) and I can relate.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Aww, this is cute :)
Great job.
I love it.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[MandaBear]

I love this. very cool :)