To Save A Fallen Angel
A Book by Abbie
 This is a book to go with my poem" Broken Deep Inside". The main character's name is Raven and I will write in the multiple character's P.O.V. This is a tragic love story of a fallen angel.  © 2012 Abbie
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This is my first story that I have put out, so beware: this story might suck. I doubt my abilities as a writer, even though I have been told that I am a good writer. The pic is not mine, so dont sue me.:P It is a close version of what I imagine Raven to look like(yes, i know that her wings don't look like angel wings, but OH well!)ANYWAYS, I love reviews and PLEASE rate!!!!!
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Abbie. Please don't listen to the a*s (I'm really sorry for the language) that posted on the wall of this book. You're idea is NOT dull and you're story is truly wonderful. Dietrich Goff has been commenting on tons of different books and he has been saying the same thing. There will come a point when he wakes up and he realizes that he is truly a lost and sick b*****d(again sorry language). He will realize that his fake life is just that. Fake. and he will truly know that he's alone with only his sick mind as company. There is one thing that won't change however. He will always be jealous of wonderful writers like you and the others. He will always he hated. and he will always be doomed to go to hell. Please do not take his words seriously. You are a wonderful writer. Please keep up the amazing work^_^
~Dreamer
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
for the language, I don't care, I used it to when it comes to that little s**t. and thank you for t.. read morefor the language, I don't care, I used it to when it comes to that little s**t. and thank you for the kind words dreamer. they are greatly appreciated! :D
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12 Years Ago
Excuse me, but did you not see what he said about my works? He threatened to steal them. That is not.. read moreExcuse me, but did you not see what he said about my works? He threatened to steal them. That is not helping, that is against the law.
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12 Years Ago
Well, I'm sorry, but I don't ant anyone altering my work. I like it the way it is thank you very muc.. read moreWell, I'm sorry, but I don't ant anyone altering my work. I like it the way it is thank you very much. And it is still taking an idea from a writer. You should ask nicely 'hey I like your idea. Would it be okay if I write something like that?' and you should credit them, even after you ask permission. An if they say no, don't do it. That should have been how he approached the matter. And he shouldn't use the same names or anything the original writer wrote. It's just not right.
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12 Years Ago
Please excuse my language, but I don't give a f**k. It's still the authors writing, and you have to .. read morePlease excuse my language, but I don't give a f**k. It's still the authors writing, and you have to ASK the writer. He he didn't ask. And it's not hard to grasp! I'm not an idiot. I may be young, but I'm smart and I understand what you are saying. But he took my friends work and made it into porn. How is that funny?
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12 Years Ago
You said the Berlin tequnique makes things funny or interesting. Porn is neither. nd yes, you have t.. read moreYou said the Berlin tequnique makes things funny or interesting. Porn is neither. nd yes, you have to ask. The writing is copywritied! We can send you to jail!
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12 Years Ago
That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard. Your ridiculous.
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12 Years Ago
That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard. Your ridiculous.
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12 Years Ago
Yes he is. And he's also saying dumb things to me.
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12 Years Ago
Don't worry I like this book he's just a dick
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12 Years Ago
I know, and thank you! :D
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12 Years Ago
People like that are the kind of people that wouldn't know a dam thing he justs saying it to be an a.. read morePeople like that are the kind of people that wouldn't know a dam thing he justs saying it to be an a*****e and he needs to get a life if he wastes his time doing stuff like this
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12 Years Ago
IK! he really irritates me! >:/
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Abbie. Please don't listen to the a*s (I'm really sorry for the language) that posted on the wall of this book. You're idea is NOT dull and you're story is truly wonderful. Dietrich Goff has been commenting on tons of different books and he has been saying the same thing. There will come a point when he wakes up and he realizes that he is truly a lost and sick b*****d(again sorry language). He will realize that his fake life is just that. Fake. and he will truly know that he's alone with only his sick mind as company. There is one thing that won't change however. He will always be jealous of wonderful writers like you and the others. He will always he hated. and he will always be doomed to go to hell. Please do not take his words seriously. You are a wonderful writer. Please keep up the amazing work^_^
~Dreamer
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
for the language, I don't care, I used it to when it comes to that little s**t. and thank you for t.. read morefor the language, I don't care, I used it to when it comes to that little s**t. and thank you for the kind words dreamer. they are greatly appreciated! :D
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12 Years Ago
Excuse me, but did you not see what he said about my works? He threatened to steal them. That is not.. read moreExcuse me, but did you not see what he said about my works? He threatened to steal them. That is not helping, that is against the law.
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This comment has been deleted by the website administrators.
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12 Years Ago
Well, I'm sorry, but I don't ant anyone altering my work. I like it the way it is thank you very muc.. read moreWell, I'm sorry, but I don't ant anyone altering my work. I like it the way it is thank you very much. And it is still taking an idea from a writer. You should ask nicely 'hey I like your idea. Would it be okay if I write something like that?' and you should credit them, even after you ask permission. An if they say no, don't do it. That should have been how he approached the matter. And he shouldn't use the same names or anything the original writer wrote. It's just not right.
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12 Years Ago
Please excuse my language, but I don't give a f**k. It's still the authors writing, and you have to .. read morePlease excuse my language, but I don't give a f**k. It's still the authors writing, and you have to ASK the writer. He he didn't ask. And it's not hard to grasp! I'm not an idiot. I may be young, but I'm smart and I understand what you are saying. But he took my friends work and made it into porn. How is that funny?
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12 Years Ago
You said the Berlin tequnique makes things funny or interesting. Porn is neither. nd yes, you have t.. read moreYou said the Berlin tequnique makes things funny or interesting. Porn is neither. nd yes, you have to ask. The writing is copywritied! We can send you to jail!
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12 Years Ago
That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard. Your ridiculous.
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12 Years Ago
That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard. Your ridiculous.
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12 Years Ago
Yes he is. And he's also saying dumb things to me.
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12 Years Ago
Don't worry I like this book he's just a dick
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12 Years Ago
I know, and thank you! :D
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12 Years Ago
People like that are the kind of people that wouldn't know a dam thing he justs saying it to be an a.. read morePeople like that are the kind of people that wouldn't know a dam thing he justs saying it to be an a*****e and he needs to get a life if he wastes his time doing stuff like this
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12 Years Ago
IK! he really irritates me! >:/
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