Chapter Five: First miracle, Complete

Chapter Five: First miracle, Complete

A Chapter by Abbie

    Raven's P.O.V.

      "Liam, you got the money?" I asked, rounding the corner to the alley where we agreed to meet afterwards. It was the same alley that had the dumpster that we hid behind earlier.

      "Yep, I got a good three thousand in here. How did you know that I wouldn't need to use the keypad and use the password to enter the vault? I mean, there definitely was one, but all I had to do was open it manually. So how'd ya know?" he asked. Stupid mortals, always have to ask questions, don't you?

     "I don't know! I just guessed! I mean, when the camera's and security is down, I would guess that everything could be opened manually, wouldn't you?" I said firmly.

     "Oh, yeah.... makes sense. So, how much of the money you want? No more than half, right?" he asked a little unsure, but firm none the less.

     "I want eight hundred. That okay with you?" I asked him, looking into his blue eyes. I'm still a bit weary because of the knife he has, so I stay where I am, a good five feet away.

     "Yeah, fine. Here ya go, take it and leave me alone." he said throwing four stacks of tens at me, and vanishing of into the shadows of the alley. Well! Somebody obviously wasn't very thankful! Then again, most of you mortals aren't. Oh, well, off to the next Miracle!


© 2012 Abbie


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Abbie
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I don't know how the angel professors will like this 'miracle' but oh well, let's see how this goes...
Are you still updating this story?

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like the sense of humor in this diologue ,i started to feel like i was there as for the grammar i'm not the best person to ask but as for the essence of it all i liked it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely write , short and hooks the reader.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love how you add abit of yourself into all the characters and your writing is very intriguing. you really draw the readers, except in this chapter you have so little details. try to add more detail. other than that though, it was really good. thnx for writhing. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a lot shorter than the other ones, and to tell you the truth it's not really detail, I'm kind of lost reading this...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Abbie

12 Years Ago

yeah, this was kinda a transition chapter, and I know its not that great.... sorry. :/
Huh? I have got to read the rest because I am not sure what is going on here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can't wait to hear what the Authority (sorry if that's the wrong name, i can't quite remember) have to say

Posted 12 Years Ago


Abbie

12 Years Ago

oh wait... you mean the Angel people who are testing her?
Amanda

12 Years Ago

yeah haha
Abbie

12 Years Ago

you'll see....>:D muahahahahahahaha

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