this is a musical, and it needs a name!~~scene 2 act 1~~

scene two of act 1 of my musical that I started for some strange reason..... and this is only scene 2 of act 1, so there will be more.

Andrea's mama - Andrea! Darling! [she stops talking to some sophisticated lady and walks over to stand next to Andrea downstage]  Isn't this just the greatest party! It will be the party of the century! Everyone will know my name from how magnificently it was put together! Isn't that just great! oh, and, uh...they will know you too, this is a party for you, of course.

 

Andrea- [sarcastically] Yes, thank you SO much for this wonderful party! [rolls her eyes at her mother]

 

Andrea's mama- [Smiles, oblivious at the eye rolling and sarcasm] Oh, your welcome dear! oh, look, there are the reporters! I'll go get my interview done! tootles! [walks over to center left and goes to talk to a woman with a microphone and a man with a camera]

 

Andrea- [sighs and crosses arms] Sometimes I think that mother cares more about her image and money than me, her only daughter and child. She couldn't even care enough to invite any of my friends!

[Andrea walks over to an empty seat at a table downstage right and sighs angrily. Andrea's Mother and the reporters then walk to downstage as the stage goes dark, except for the one spotlight on them. Andrea watches everything.]

Interviewer: Well, Mrs. Ri-

Andrea's Mama- [interrupts]It's Ms. actually.

Interviewer- Oh, I'm sorry! Ms. Rica Reyes. Well Ms.Reyes, I do believe that this magnificent party was put together by you, was it not?

Ms. Reyes (Andrea's Mamma) -yes, yes it was! [smiles at the camera] I spent quite a lot of money on it, but it was all for my daughter, which I love and care about so much, so it was worth every hundred dollar bill.

Interviewer- that's so sweet of you! good to know that even the rich care about their children so much.

Ms. Reyes- yes, I care about my daughter so much! She's the only family I have left... [puts on a fake upset, -on-the-verge-of-tears face]

Interviewer- aww! well, I hope your mother-daughter bond stays strong! Now, it has been rumored, that this party may be the biggest, most expensive bash in the country. It also has been this may be the party of the century. what do you think of that?

Ms. Reyes- That would be wonderful! I think that it would be nice to know that my daughters party is so much of a success. [smiles at interviewer]

Interviewer- Well, I'm afraid that we have to be leaving, but thank you for your time. Everybody, this has been an interview of the wonderful Ms. Rica Reyes!

Ms. Reyes- Oh any time.Thank you so much. 

[the lights come  back on and the interviewer and her cameraman leave downstage and go off stage. Ms. Reyes  goes to center right over to her daughter.]

Andrea- *testily* what do you want mother?

Ms. Reyes- Nothing, I just wanted to say that my interview is done and that I'm in the running, as I thought. Isn't it magnificent?

Andrea- yeah, it so is. [rolls her eyes at her mother]

Ms. Reyes- I knew you would agree! Oh, and I have something for you. [Searches her person for what she's looking for. Goes into her purse and pulls out a envelope] This was given to me by your father before he died, I was to give it to you on your sixteenth birthday. Here you go. [Hands over letter, then goes off to mingle with. other guests.

Andrea- My father? 

Author's Note

please review! and anybody got an Idea for the name? anybody?

Reviews

[deepblue04]

interesting.... good job~!

[Mariah Corey]

through my eyes, idk. Anyway love it. :D

[Peaceworker22]

I automatically hate Rica already. Diaries of the abandoned maybe? The downside of being rich? ???? I got nothing sweetie.

[Abbie]

your supposed to hate her. I hate her and I hate writing her, but I had to put her in...xPand thanks for the title Ideas. I may use one of them, may not. :)

[Peaceworker22]

You better use one honey, Lol! Jk, it's all up to you. After all, you are the writer! : D

[Kerri Hart]

amazing love love loveeeeeeeeeee
no titles yet not quite sure what it is about yet

[Abbie]

glad you like it! :) and that's okay, I only sort of know where it's going and what it's about... XD

[Kerri Hart]

Hhhaha i thot i was the only one like tha! ;)

[Abbie]

haha, nope. me, owlgirl and a few other people are like that. ;)

[Kerri Hart]

good :) makes me fell better ;)

[Abbie]

x)

[Sophie]

great scene, no title ideas yet :P

[Abbie]

thanks! :d and I know! It's near impossible for me to think of one! I like Amanda's tho... I might go with it. :)

[Junert]

It's a nice piece. You could clearly make out the characters. It's a job done well.

[Abbie]

thank you:)

[Aly Jones]

How about, "The Party That My Rich Mother Paid For?" XD Kidding, of course.

This was really good. I really enjoyed reading it. :)

[Abbie]

XD funny, but she hates being rich, and she dislikes her mother. :P and thank you. :)

[Aly Jones]

You're welcome.

[Abbie]

:D

[Taylor Ann]

What a wonderful piece! I can feel the emotion that Andrea holds, and can relate with her as well. Beautifully written.
As for the name, I always give my stories a title when I'm finished, only because I can sum everything up in the title, or give a hint as what would happen closer to the end of the story. But you don't have to do that.
Think about your characters, the setting, and the plot. Those three thrings are the most important. After taking those into consideration your title may be a little easier to come up with. Hope my advice helped!
Great work, by the way! :)

[Abbie]

thank you for the advice on figuring out a title Taylor! and I'm glad you liked it and can relate. I try to make it so that the reader can relate to what I write. :) thank you for the review.

[Amanda]

ummm...how about Tales of the Misunderstood or something? I don't know. This was good, keep it up, Abbie :)

[Abbie]

thanks for the Idea! :D I might use it :) and thank you Amanda, happy to know that you like it :)