The Animal I Have Become.

Entrenched in my heartache, and seething from your deceit, your wicked words only building me up to fall from my feet, devoured in jealousy, shrouded from your secrecy, this time you cannot blame this on me, you’ve punctured my veins, bled them dry, like the vampire, you’ve stolen my decencies, now blame me, twist it like you always do, tell me how I never deserved you, I cannot fight it, you’re right, this time, I feel the same as you do, I don’t deserve your games, your demanded jaded love, infested with false idea’s and ulterior motives, I deserve true unwavering love, like I had offered you, spin it in your mind, manifesting it to your whim, the light I saw in your eyes has started to dim, your claims of clarity that your words describe flowing so easily like water, when in truth your mind was much darker. You’ve driven me back to that which I never wanted to go back, the animal unforgiving seeing that you all are of a different species, cold blooded, silver tongued suited for destruction, you bend the rules as your needs and wants demand, playing any good man for a fool, as you ask where the same type of men reside, refusing to see what is in front of you, that is why I must exist, to give them some of their own medicine. At last you have created the predator to prey on the Praying Mantis, to let the black widow taste her own venom. Watch in wonder as you take credit in the creation of the animal I have become.

Reviews

[T. Wes Smith]

Thank you so much everyone, for you kind words.

[Secret Lullaby]

wow this is REALY good.You can actully feel the pain in the words

[Courtney]

very good

[Boldpen]

I liked the poem....
The feelings of pain and power were spun gorgeously in your write (which is a very hard task to do)
the sadness and determination to revenge creates the main essence. It was sad but extremely well penned write. Great Job!!