Pendulum

Pendulum

A Poem by Sloane Holt

Swinging

Embracing extremes

Swinging

Ever-changing it seems

 

Swinging

Some fast, others slow

Swinging

For a purpose we don't know

 

Swinging

Keeping time til death

Resting

For there's no time left.

© 2013 Sloane Holt


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I really admire the image you convey of the swinging pendelum and also, your rhyming scheme. In our lives, we have no choice but to keep time until our last breath. I also love how when you wrote when the pendelum was resting, it was at death as when it was swinging, one would still be living and have a beating heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I really admire the image you convey of the swinging pendelum and also, your rhyming scheme. In our lives, we have no choice but to keep time until our last breath. I also love how when you wrote when the pendelum was resting, it was at death as when it was swinging, one would still be living and have a beating heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I found this to remind me of A blinded lady of Justice, should one assume an underline theme?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sloane Holt

11 Years Ago

I've actually never even heard of A Blinded Lady of Justice

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 Added on November 5, 2012
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Sloane Holt
Sloane Holt

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I love God, music, writing, and all sorts of art. I'm kind of a morbid thinker and some of my posts might reflect that, just a heads up. I know I'm a white girl, but I still love to rap, odd but true.. more..

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