Perfect Love

My first ever love poem, written for high school crush freshman year, but she never recieved it... in fact i don't know if she even knew i had a crush on her!

Your eyes are like the deep darkness of space,

Magically Enchanting,

Your smile is like the far depths of the ocean,

Beautiful yet shy,

Your hair is like the boastful flames of the sun,

Smooth and Shining,

Your skin is like the smooth surface of water,

So incredibly silky and soft, it's magic,

Your scent is like the auroma of dinner before it's served,

So sweet it's tormenting,

Your motive is like an infant still in the nursery,

So pure, so very true, it's a miracle,

But my love for you outlasts all,

So strong, So very Powerful, it will never end.

Reviews

[Darian]

I'm very impressed. You said this was written your freshman year? You were quite the wordsmith even then. Very cool.

[Duane Klinger]

great imagery, and great word choice. Beautiful, I can say little else

[IMOGEAN]

Beautiful.