If

A love poem I wrote for a high school crush, and guess what? She never recieved it!

If grand green feilds of grass could be any greener,

They would reach a lovely fierocity of greeness achieved only by your eyes,

If the soft smoothness of silk could be any softer,

They would arrive in the breathtaking beautifying realm occupied solely by your ever gratifying lips,

If the flourescent flow of water could be any more graceful,

They would enter the galaxy where your fluid flaunting hair could only rest,

If the amazing array of blended colors in a rainbow could be any more dazzling,

They would breach a demension where only the softest, smoothest skin as yours could wait,

If true defining love could be any more joyous,

They would describe perfectly the fealing i experience whilst in your company.

Reviews

[Rodwonder]

This is solid, the prose leaves you actually imagining the colors. The sent of a lovers hair and falling back to a better time... or good time to come...