My Love For You

A love poem that I wrote for a high school girlfriend on valentines day, what's funny is that she wrote one for me too and i think her's was way better!

My love i think of you as i think of the sun,

bright beautiful and florescent, i only wish to be in your presence,

 

While i see your face, i can see much grace,

much grace to thy perfect soul, thy perfect soul that brilliantly knows,

 

knows of times and places, and different faces,

in different times, to different rhymes,

 

Most do not see, how much you mean to me,

or what you are meant to be, i know i am just me,

 

and i know that you, are always you,

and that you cannot stew, stew a world of chaos and brew,

 

but some may think that i, that i don't love you,

yet you only know that my, my love is true,

 

there are no words or looks, or explanations or books,

to describe the feeling, that i feel in kneeling,

 

kneeling and seeing, seeing and believing,

that i do love, the only true dove,

 

the dove of trust, of trust and lust,

lust and compassion, compassion and ration,

 

Now, just remember, i am an ember,

to your perfect flame, as you rise to infinite fame,

 

fame and splendor, beyond a splinter,

a splinter of a doubt, by which you route,

 

route your feeligs for all inside, inside where you sit ad hide,

from all that can hurt or make you cry, while you make me sit and abide,

 

abide my time as he does his, and see how much love is,

love infinity, love in many,

 

many days,

many thoughts,

different ways,

different stops.

Reviews

[Darian]

Cool and kinda catchy, like it's beat should be in a song. I also like the use of "thy", it gives the piece some personality.