The Second, Two Words

Two Words

Gypsy eyes

Cold hands

Warm heart

Amber waves

Weak knees

Level head

Stay smart

 

Time runs, so fast

Eagle fly, so high

Closed mind, don’t last

Torrential rest, always die

 

Two words

Finger tips

Electric touch

Roger that

Quick tongue

Golden voice

Winning smile

Cool cat

 

Time runs, so fast

Eagle fly, so high

Closed mind, don’t last

Torrential rest, always die

Reviews

[zainul]

Watched the video.
Enjoyed the lovely poem with the video.
Awesome work.

[Alrick]

This is awesome. I adore the formatting of it, and love your distinct style placed all throughout this poem! great piece! i love the 2 word lines that happen to tell the same story in less words than most people would use!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

This where I got the concept for this piece. Try saying it to the beat of this song and see how it flows.
http://youtu.be/tkFOBx6j0l8

[kayla]

I enjoyed this

[Rhea752]

very well done. keep writing.

[Marissa]

nicely done

[w]

Same comments as the last one.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

This was perfectly written. Well played words with a cunning meaning. Thanks for the good read

[Laura Maidah]

Short. Static. Perfect. Cool cat? Nice. I actually say that all the time because I'm so freakin lame. The last stanza is my husband. We're in love. It's my way of saying I want to have its kids, it's so red hot great.