A Day At The Mecca

At The Mecca

It’s not reckless

There’s no restless

For a quest let’s

Ride on the wind

Share a few grins

Venture through the sky

And get high

On the warm sunlight

Here there’s never night

Vibes are just right

When we’re together

I can’t see nothing better

I’ll write 1000 letters

So at The Mecca

I wish to never leave

I truly do believe

Right at the start

I healed a lonely heart

I hope to never part

From The Mecca

Reviews

[Arial, Black]

It is upbeat and I like the scattered rhyme. I think it has more impact if you end it at 'I healed a lonely heart'. There are different places called Mecca or The Mecca, and I don't know which you are writing about specifically, but it is symbolic of a place of pilgrimage. It seems fitting that you would heal a lonely heart on the way. :)

[allie_arrowz]

Interesting. I like the rhythm, it flows

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome! Reminds me of (wierdly) putting on the Ritz by taco. I like you're writing style Keep on keeping on! Lol