You be surprised

30/30

Limited space
Overlapping tension
Towering emotions
Hair-trigger temper
Sense of lost, longing
Half-truths, evolving suspension
You be surprised;
What the body grows accustomed;
When survival key key

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Hello again...
Did you mean to write key key in your last line?
Again, I did like reading your words but again I must say that with punctuation your message would be loud and clear.
You write at the beginning 30/30 what does that mean?
And all of us is flawed in one way or another but we hopefully work through those flaws and become more of ourselves...if that makes sense.
Lisa, still in Spain

[slfisher89]

in the US, April is considered National poetry month; 30 for 30 (30/30) is a way to celebrate it. 30 for 30 is a challenge to all poets in April; to write 30 poems in 30 days.

[Lisasview]

Really, I did not know that.. Thank you.. I will look into it.
Lisa, now in Spain