Take heed of your surroundings

Take heed of your surroundings

A Poem by slfisher89
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30/30

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The common,
Unassuming,
Typical signs for tell;
Seeing eyes,
Listening ears
More in-depth; than
a heads-up penny
Perceptive beyond the
tea cup's bottom
See child
Mismatched, balled up
socks speak
of upcoming stressful/exciting
task
Take note of a crushed
half-smoken cigarette
Hints of smoldering aggravation
Never overlook ordinary omens

© 2022 slfisher89


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Bravo 👏🏽 I really wish to learn a lot from everyone I meet here and all writings I’ve read so far is 👍.. and yours ain’t exceptional

Posted 2 Years Ago


Indeed, everyday life does present clues we often miss. Beware of a man who mumbles to himself, like the New York subway shooter.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely crafted poem! Very dark!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 16, 2022
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slfisher89
slfisher89

Atlanta, GA



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