Wanderlustful Mind

A Poem by slfisher89

I am a rebellion
I am a revolutionary
I am a train hopper
I am every thing and any thing; I want to be in my mind.
You live in a fantasy world; you say
I do
I am the disco ball of attention
Snagging and drawing eyes
I have a untouched vocal talent and the star in my music videos
My fantasy world is where my silly dreams run unbound
That why I live in my fantasy world
I am loved, dotted, and treasured by my love
Replacement for the one my selfishness lost
You say I live in a fantasy world
I create an illusionary Vicodin to live in a real world
Yes; I do live in a fantasy world
I am incredibly flawed creature
trying to improve and do better
wish me luck and let fantasy be my crutch
for now.

© 2017 slfisher89

Author's Note

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boygene borice

Beautiful. Mind is an incredible gift God gave us, it takes us somewhere we cant reach by any means of transport.
I love your poem

Posted 7 Years Ago

Dolce Vita

There are some beautiful phrases in there; 'snagging and drawing eyes' really got my attention. I also liked how you ask for the reader's sympathy at the end; is it such a bad thing to live in a fantasy?!
Thank you also for your very kind review of my poem Sober - I can't seem to leave comments on any reviews I get but it is much appreciated 😊

Posted 7 Years Ago

junXion

Got to love your work! Its repetitive and I love it! Couldn't have done it better myself. One quick tip, not to offend you, check your spelling (That why I live). Keep up the good work! Sincerely yours, Jules.