I Wrote A Poem

Today I wrote a poem,

About love and friendship,

About a test between two people.

Friendship starts with a smile,

That can forever go the mile.

And is something that cannot be defiled.

Then friendship grows,

From the seeds that were sown.

From there it will be known,

That love is the story now told,

From the ancient lands of old.

A story that will forever be strong and bold.

Love and friendship stay the age,

Put on display from a stage.

To go on for forever and a day.

Reviews

[FaeryQueen]

keep up the great writing!!!

[Jen Walters]

Thanks I shall try, I am very busy as of late, and I have several projects under way. I will definitely try to. Have a great day.

[Coyote Poetry]

Jen. The site is working. Sometimes in a odd way. The poem was still good. Love and friendship. Always a positive topic. I hope you are doing well. Have fun and be safe.
Coyote

[Jen Walters]

Thanks for your kind review, I deeply appreciate it. I think I submitted too many poems without commenting on other's work is all now that I think about it. Check out my other poetry if you want to, and have a great day.

[Coyote Poetry]

I will. Summer is hard to find readers. Warm days keep us busy and you are welcome.

[Jen Walters]

Yes they do, this is the most time I have spent out of doors in the past few years. So I don't have much time. Married life also takes up most of my time too. Have a great evening

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Love eternal...
The most precious gift. Very nice.

[Jen Walters]

Thank you for your kind review, I wrote this poem as a test because I was having problems with this site. I deeply appreciate your kind review, and have a great day.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

What sort of test? Posting?

[Jen Walters]

yes, I think I posted too many poems in a row, now that I think on it and not commented on other's work enough.