I see that writing means a lot to you. Words soothe your mind when grayness ( as I call depression) looms on the horizon. But sometimes they clutter up your head and refuse to spring out in a sensible manner. Yes, words can be so unyielding when inspiration fails us.
And yet, words are your power. Our power. And when we're gone, the things we have said and the pages we have written will remain. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for your kind review of this poem, I deeply appreciate it. That's why I wrote this poem in p.. read moreThanks for your kind review of this poem, I deeply appreciate it. That's why I wrote this poem in part to remind us that just as much as words are our power, they can also be our undoing. Have a great day.
I see that writing means a lot to you. Words soothe your mind when grayness ( as I call depression) looms on the horizon. But sometimes they clutter up your head and refuse to spring out in a sensible manner. Yes, words can be so unyielding when inspiration fails us.
And yet, words are your power. Our power. And when we're gone, the things we have said and the pages we have written will remain. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for your kind review of this poem, I deeply appreciate it. That's why I wrote this poem in p.. read moreThanks for your kind review of this poem, I deeply appreciate it. That's why I wrote this poem in part to remind us that just as much as words are our power, they can also be our undoing. Have a great day.
Thank you so much, I write from the heart, and I try to show my thoughts and moods in my words. Wor.. read moreThank you so much, I write from the heart, and I try to show my thoughts and moods in my words. Words are just words but they can hold so much power if we are not careful and don't take more time to think about them. Have a great day.
9 Years Ago
well done and thank you
9 Years Ago
you're quite welcome, nothing thrills me more, than to have perfect strangers appreciate my work suc.. read moreyou're quite welcome, nothing thrills me more, than to have perfect strangers appreciate my work such as you have; have a great evening
I agree. Our words will go on if we teach our knowledge to the next generation.
"My words will go on,
Even after I am gone.
This I promise you."
I feel good life and kindness/love shared. Leave a part of us forever upon the earth. Thank you Jen for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
my husband and I had a disagreement the night before I wrote this I think it was so long ago now, an.. read moremy husband and I had a disagreement the night before I wrote this I think it was so long ago now, and a lot has happened since then. My poetry comes from the heart, so its easy for me to pick a thing or an object and just write about it. Thank you for your kind words as always, and have a great day.
9 Years Ago
You are welcome. Life will create thoughts and good poetry.
I am an amateur poet seeking to be published in a newspaper column or magazine, so that hopefully a major publisher will pick me up and I can turn my work into a work of art. I am 34 newly married an.. more..