The Path

The path is something I must walk alone you see,

For it is mine, given only to me.

You cannot walk it for me,

You must let me choose which way to be.

I have to figure out this path on my own,

To see what seeds must be sown.

To do this I will need your love and patience,

So that I can prove my sentience.

I take each step with pride,

So that I may one day guide,

Myself towards the future,

A fate of which I am not so sure.

Of this I can only know,

Your love has given me what I need to tow.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely poem of your own journey of pursuits and goals so nicely expressed

[Jen Walters]

Thank you so much, I deeply appreciate your comments. Have a great day.

[Gee]

Finding your own way in life,like this,simple easy to read and understand and rhyming...my cup of tea

[Jen Walters]

Thank you so much for your kind words!!! Fee free to browse my other poetry if you like and have a wonderful day.

[Gee]

Will do,you too......

[Indra Neil]

a profound and well crafted brevity with a strong message! well done! :)

[Jen Walters]

Thank you so much I appreciate the comments and have a great day.

[Indra Neil]

You are welcome!