The Great Mysteries

The Great Mysteries can never be understood,

For they are not made of earth and wood.

The Great Mysteries come from beyond,

They form each and every bond.

They Great Mysteries are what make up life,

Some say that they are the cause of our strife.

I saw we are what make up life and strife.

We are a combination of the Great Mysteries.

We are what we believe.

The Great Mysteries guide us.

To believe in them is a must.

They form the balance of the universe.

They must not be dispersed.

Reviews

[Indra Neil]

Very good rhyme flow and well composed! You might consider to edit 'they' to 'the' in second stanza.

[Jen Walters]

Thanks for the editing suggestions and the positive feedback. Thanks also for the great review and have a great day.

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome!

[Adriani Putri]

Is it me being misunderstood, but I think you should've typed "Their Great Mysteries are.."
Over all, I really love this :)

[Jen Walters]

Thanks for the editing suggestions and I will consider all that I get. Also thanks for the review and have a great day.

[chloerigby]

I Know that your and mine poem's are so good

[Jen Walters]

Thanks for the positive review and have a great day.

[chloerigby]

that's okay