The Tiger Prince
A Book by Amber Daniel
 Like any eight year old boy, Lee didn’t like change at all. But he loved his mother very much, and didn’t want her moving to China all by herself.  © 2013 Amber Daniel
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I'm reading this and you are not giving the size or shape or texture of the chest. I'm a sorta person who likes to read descriptive words, especially if it's an item of interest. :)
Other than that, the story I've read so far is very good ! I'm - a little surprised you posted a full chapter in the NOTE area which is normally used for small author comments. You may in time copy and re-post it as a fresh initial chapter scooting the other ones down.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I hadn't realized I posted it wrong lol. I'm still new to this site. Thank you for your review!
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11 Years Ago
Sure, I'm examining the first chapter tho and there is no mention of the chest. Is the first chapter.. read moreSure, I'm examining the first chapter tho and there is no mention of the chest. Is the first chapter you have here the first chapter of your story - or the 2nd ?
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Amber DanielIowa Park, TX
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