The never ending flow of thought

A continuos flow of thought over time

To write a song I wonder

who do I write for

influence leads to blunder

can't pass through the right door

can't I value what is there

and not what I make of it

but the more that I care

the less I can be interpreted

Author's Note

Gonna keep adding to this, and see where it takes me!

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

I would stop here...makes you ponder as is. Why mess with it.
Adding words...or sentences...or phrases....just for the sake of adding
or to see where it takes you may just make it convoluted and distant...
Fewer words is often the answer...In this case, it definitely is.
That of course is just my opinion..You can do anything you want, it's your write.
I liked it though.
allen

[slayerjay]

Thank you! Yes I have realized that I cannot add to this. I have tried but deleted what I wrote because I was doing it for the sake of doing it. It didn't feel right. So this is it. :)