Stuck

I have no idea what to do anymore

I guess I've proven enough that I'm no good

To anyone or anything

To someone or something

I guess I've always believed in love

But I'm sure it doesn't always last

Though I see the exception in my family

I just don't see the same in my self

I've come to the point where I don't care anymore

"AM I STILL WORTH THE DREAM THAT'S WAITING FOR ME?"

"IS THERE EVEN A FUTURE FOR ME?"

"HOW COME I DON'T TRUST LOVE?"

I just don't care anymore.

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

Love does have its blips, perhaps that is why many feel it doesn't last. But perhaps love of its essence morphs and exists beyond what the heart and mind can grasp. So much to think about. Thanks for sharing.

[Veronica Staehle]

This is a rich topic and can see what you are touching on; the sentiment is entirely valid. My one thought is that while it’s completely personal in reality, I wonder if there could be a way to minimize the “I” statements.

Perhaps through rephrasing similar to this:
“No idea what to do anymore
Proven enough that I’m no good..
Etc”

Something like that might help a reader connect a little easier with their understanding of your experience without it feeling like it’s something thats yours and not something for them to relate to. Still, I like what you’re doing here though.

You’re worth the dream, 100%!