hoplessness

love is a terrable curse
to love but not to have
to suffer a terrable heart ache
a lonley sorrow


hope is a lost cause to me
to hope is to let in disappointment
to hope is to greet despare
to have lost


to regret is a fuocious monster
it naws at my entrails
it nest in my mind
to die slowly inside


to forget is the greatest gift of all
to stop pain and sorrow in their tracks
to conquor a hopless life
to live in peace and to love again

Reviews

[Mounsell]

This could be great but it has too many typos.

[P.S.Chance]

yes. to allow ourselves to love and be loved - even after rejection - can bring us to the person(s) who appreciate us completely.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

very nice, the only thing i would do is change terrable to terrible

[Robbie~xoxo~]

So true, love can bring despair.. you have expressed this well! Just a few typos need correcting.... I think it would make this poem an exceptional one! :)





*terrible, despair, ferocious, conquer, gnaws, heartache*

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to forget all things. Sometime just lessons for us to remember the next time we try the emotion of love and hope again. A outstanding poem.
Coyote