The Pain

A short poem about a girl with pain built up inside of her.

She brings the blade close to her wrist

She cuts herself once more,

Not enough to die

But just enough to feel the pain

She was once happy

But not anymore

As she sits and begins to cry

She thinks about all the pain she feels inside. 

Author's Note

I'm not much of a writer, but I'm just trying it out.

Reviews

[NightHeartBattles]

I love this one. Well done. Although it's sad for me to say this, your writing captures the feeling really well (I have a friend who used to self-harm). Well done. It's really good.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is much painful. The imagery is captured. Keep writing, inspire yourself with works of others. You can write better. Just believe it. Well done.

[alex]

i love it sky