Earth <3

a person like a seed
you get plated in the earth
1. {your trying grow}
2. {trying become strong}
3.{reach to light no be left in dark }
4.{ your understanding littel by littel}
5.{your keeping your self strong }
6.{your opening your heart out}
7.{ you find your self }
you have grown out to earth like flower
to show the colors bring to this place you call earth

Reviews

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wow beautiful poem D! It's short, sweet and very very cute! I love how you written it! Very nice work done here.

[Elizabeth Fiske]

I like how unique the style of this poem is :) and how you're comparing human growth to plant growth. Nice :)

[Reena]

Hmm. you have numbered the steps from a seed to a flower! the 7th one is most wonderful-you open out to rediscover yourself! A different structure than the poems I have read before!