Desert Love

Desert Love

I just kept guessing and don't know when it happened.

A rose of love on desert sand and I lost myself when you appeared ~

And I lost myself when you appeared ~

Author's Note

Sometimes you don't even know or realize what happened.

Reviews

[Marie]

Yes, love can definitely take one by surprise and you have very finely captured that in this beautiful romantic succinct poetic gem. Love your excellent choice of graphic, it complements your words so well and it is ssssssoooooo pretty too. Lovely write, Star! Thank you for sharing...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Marie! I'm just a star but you're rock star 🎸⭐️ when you ✍️ poems

[Marie]

You are a shining star glowing irrediscently in the dark velvet midnight sky of poetry, Sky! Most welcome always...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Marie reading this from you makes me feel like 🤴 hahah....
Thanks and bless you always 🙏🏻

[Marie]

Thank you and bless you too, Sky...

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Miracles do occur and as you mentioned we don't even know or realize what happened.
Loved this, dear poet.
Have a nice day :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes, they do for sure. Thanks for the review.

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

My pleasure :)

[Chris Shaw]

The repetition works well. A short poems which conveys falling in love. Nicely penned Sky.

Chris

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Chris! Yes, love is amazing. The feeling of being in love is rejuvenating in all sense.

[Chris Shaw]

I remember it very well:) Enjoy that exhilarating, everything is good feeling :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thank you very much 🙏

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. Great job.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thank you very much Thomas :)

[June bug]

This is a beautiful write.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks June!

[June bug]

not a problem

[Amy R]

Wow, in just 3 lines,
creating a sense of focus and brevity, of falling in love and being lost..
I enjoyed this piece, VERY POWERFUL.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Amy! Sometimes something's just happens and you don't even realized how and when? Your reviews always makes smile 😊 thanks again 👍🏻

[Amy R]

I understand what u mean, life has away with things.
You're welcome. 🤗

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes, life is twist and bold both at same time. Magic of love ~ maybe or definitely maybe!

[Amy R]

Ahah ...magic for sure !!