Miles Away!

A journey of a single soul :)

Miles Away!

I am walking on the snow & fading do you know?

My steps are slow, mind stumbling & shivering cold

Lone in this journey, I'll cross miles of roads

But I'm destined for my destiny & none other goals

Gently, I'll disappear, Miles away my love

Yes, miles away from you my love!

Author's Note

You need to decide your destiny and walk through the roads.
Then it maybe a long lone journey or thousand years in love. Who knows?
Stay hungry, Stay foolish!

Reviews

[Marie]

A very emotive write which depicts the encounter of a lone journey and the struggle it is to walk miles away from the one you love. The best roads to walk are the roads less travelled, those roads which others avoid to walk the same road as everybody else, but they miss ssssssoooooo much by doing that, while on the roads less travelled you will find treasures which will remain with you for your whole lifetime and perhaps, Love is travelling that same road from the opposite direction looking for YOU! There are lots of mysteries to be solved on the road less travelled. You are different to all the others, I know you will enjoy it, Sky...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I loves to be different Marie! And yes, I really enjoyed the journey so far. Thanks for understanding and as usual its pleasure reading your views. Thanks for your visit :)

[Marie]

Most welcome and as always I enjoy my visit with you too, Sky...

[poetgurl]

I can feel the emotion in this write. No nicely written and expressed

[Chris Shaw]

You convey a real feeling of a struggle and loneliness with this poem. The snow can be deep and walking in it in sub zero temperatures can hazardous. You have to keep going.

Chris

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks for understanding Chrish.
Indeed few roads of life needs to be travelled alone!

[Seriana]

Who knows, indeed! Love this! And the picture speaks a poem of its own.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Seriana! I am glad that you enjoyed the read.

[Writergurl]

This is so lovely, Very nicely written and loved the rhyme scheme.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks writergurl.
Miles away from love in love with love :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Poet... in my twenties I learned to Snow Ski... and then I went high up a Mountain by Chair (where I jumped off) and slowly descended in a few hours. The next year I went to a smaller Ski Resort and descended through a Trail in the Woods. A Fireside Rum and a Chat was all I needed to relax. I appreciate your Poem and I am grateful that I experienced a bit of Heaven on Earth at an early age. gently, Pat

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks for your visit and review. Sky loves to ski⛷️ a lot

[JR]

I certainly get the sense of isolation as the speaker walks through the snow. It brings up many questions... why leave his love? Clearly the farther he goes, the colder it gets... where is he going? The best writing leaves you with questions to ponder.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes JR, the more further he goes that more his journey get mysterious. Pondering is good at times! Thanks for the visit and review.