One step closer

One step closer

Close your eyes

Kiss me tight

I'm

Waiting for you

Dear

❤️

Hold my hand

Marry me then

I'm

Waiting for you

Dear

❤️

Moon at the Dawn

Twilight raising stars

Waiting for you

Dear

❤️

Because I've loved you for a thousands year's

Darling I've loved you for thousands year's

Waiting for you

Dear

❤️

One step closer to you

Reviews

[Writergurl]

This is so wonderful and sweet. Nicely expressed

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

This is really something close to my heart. Thank you for the review.

[Writergurl]

not a problem

[emmajoygreen]

Words like yours are what people need to read, to feel and - wish they were in your shoes. I hope your beloved lady is forever yours by now. Finely laid words and more than eye-catching.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks for your wonderful and eye-catching review Emma. Still happy to be a single and I think I will enjoy few more years being an eligible bachelorate.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I like the arrangement of your poem it frames each segment
Leading the reader to your own cadence. Very nice a beautiful love poem.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Cherrie. Some special moments deserves special frames. As they last forever in our memories. Glad that you like the poem. Thanks again :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sky... a most beautiful proposal with Trillions of tears of happiness for you and your betrothed. Amazing grace... Pat

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Oh Pat amazed after reading your review....
Blessings to share :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

What a beautifully romantic poem Sky.. a declaration of love in abundance! Love the imagery paints a most powerful love story .

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Katrina. That's simply my way of expressing the feelings of love...

[Katrina Mckeown]

That’s good Sky, you obviously have a lot of love to give. Kudos

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Glad you have spot that well lol...
Most welcome Kat :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

No worries my friend, it shines through you! :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

And that brought back the smile again! Thanks again :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

Glad your smile is back :)
and your radiating love in everything you are and do, I sense it too!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You starting sensing huh? I hope it's no love then lol

[Katrina Mckeown]

It’s your good spirit shining through and thank you for being my friend :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Oh pleasure all mine :)

[Fran Marie]

O h..my..but this is
a beautiful declaration
of love..filled with undying
admiration and affection
A poetic expression of love

well done

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thank you Fran. Love flows through heart...

[Fran Marie]

you're welcome
dear friend

[Pradnya]

Sky,
what a beautiful romantic poem :)
i loved especially the line ' i have loved you for thousand years'
u just turned a simple words of romance into a masterpiece romantic poem :)
thanks for sharing
Pradnya

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Pradnya for your encouraging words. That's how love has to be, I feel.

[Pradnya]

Its the readers pleasure always to read good and talented works :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Pradnya :)

[Patricia Wedel]

Twilight raising Stars... for a thousand years and
wishes do come true...
She will wear Juniper in her hair and smile for you.
truly a beautiful proposal... Pat

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I wish your wish should becomes true.
Thanks Pat your words means a lot for me.

[Patricia Wedel]

I love the songs of the Artist "Train"....
You remind me of him. truly, Pat

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Hmmm "Play that song" by him my fav.
Ah, I'm just Sky you can see me from window Pat. lol

[Chris Shaw]

This is beautifully romantic love poem with an offer of marriage thrown in for added measure. A thousand years is a long time waiting. A lovely heartfelt piece of brevity SKY.

Chris

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Chris. Yes thousands years is a long time but I don't mind awaiting that long for my love. Because when you are in love you are never alone. Never ever!

[DAH]

This has the feeling of a powerful love song; love the repetition lines.

Keep loving, keep pushing, keep writing.

Bravo!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks DAH