Green Date

Green Date

Put down your pen & listen to my heart,

I've hands full mud and you sprinkle water drops!

Get out of your dp & walk through this farms,

This green beautiful leaves and those flowers hanging with charm!

Get rid of share & stop tagging all,

The water flowing through river and those winds singing songs!

Shut down your gadgets & turn down your techie thoughts,

The teasing white moon and those twinkling bright stars, calling us my love and you still thinking on?

What you still thinking of?

Author's Note

A date but not at "prom" only in the natures arm.

Reviews

[Marie]

What a wonderful invitation to enjoy a date with your lover and Mother Nature. Sounds ssssssoooooo beautiful, Sky! Couldn't imagine a nicer place to visit on a date, so relaxing, so peaceful, the silence is deafening and the only sounds to be heard are the sweet kisses the lovers exchange. You are such a romantic poetic writer, Sky!!! Romantic poetry is your forte... Love this poem! Thank you for sharing...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Hahaha thanks Marie. Indeed love ❤ makes me go crazy, passionate and helps me to write ✍️ for my special lady 💃 All dedicated to that one and only sweetheart 😘

[Marie]

Wonderful! Bless you both, dear Sky...

[poetgurl]

This is so wonderful. Love the outside, it relieves so much stress, being one with nature.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Absolutely! Natures revives all of us. So, when are you planning for your Green Date?

[poetgurl]

I'm outside a lot more then I used to be, my ex husband was controlling. I can breathe now, and soak myself in nature whenever I want. Loving the single life again.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Oh! At least you're breathing and that's more important! Get over the past :)

[poetgurl]

I am over it. I am loving myself again.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Great and congrats!

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl..]

love your last stanza, This is a wonderful piece. enjoyed this

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes, the last stanza is definitely for lovers of today's age. Always bust with gadgets rather than the nature. Thanks for your review!

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl)]

I am an outdoors person. I think it's a shame now days, Kids don't know how to be kids, they much rather play games on their phones and such. Nicely written.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Agree with you!

[Amy R]

What a sweet invitation,
How I would enjoy a green date,
Full of nature's joy and beauty,
-Amy

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

So ready for a green date? :)

[Amy R]

I live where I appreciate nature to the fullest and also the life everyone is stuck in, where its all buildings,. I love feeling the grass on my feet and the beautiful flowers scents. What a gift we have yet most fail to enjoy it while we have it. ❣

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Absolutely, very few understands and very rare gets the time to live a life like that in nature.

[Amy R]

yes dear, hope u get time to feel the beauty of it to. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes, I'll and hope you as well :)

[Pradnya]

Sky,
Just loved ur poems . Thank you so much for sharing . Its so beautifully written. It is simple and beautiful poem.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thank you very much Pradnya :)

[That1Nerd23]

This is brilliant! Quite enjoyed It!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

It's too awesome to expience it my friend. Thanks :)

[Akash gaikwad]

Sky you go with your name loving the nature as sky is. Sky is beautiful and marvelous and mysterious. This poem is like it only. It made me go in the imagination world.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Akash.

[Mrudula Rani]

A beautiful tempting invitation to enjoy nature and nurture a soul. Sounds like a dream for people who are stuck in a concrete jungle.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes it is a dream for people who stuck in a concrete jungle friend. And unfortunately, we all are victims of this :( Hope to get rid of this soon.

[Mrudula Rani]

I wonder if it is possible!

[Onlyme]

Loved your poem about the beauty around us in general called earth's nature. And exactly about getting off your electronic gadgets and enjoy it more so. Than wasting time on gadgets.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes Dee, I feel people are more prone to use of gadgets then to live a real beautiful life. I feel, wasting time on gadgets is like insulting the beauty of life which is gifted to us by god. Thanks for the visit friend. I appreciate your views.

[Onlyme]

Look forward to reading more from you.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks friend :)

[kitty]

When nature calls we should obey. Look at the flowers feel the rain...nothing to lose everything to gain! This reader is taken right into an imaginary dream!. Dream I must as it takes me back in time Thank you!

[kitty]

Dont know why this was posted twice.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

...nothing to lose everything to gain! So true you said, nature is so serene and so calm. Always loves to be in the natures arm. Your most welcome kitty!

[kitty]

My pleasure!